Sunday, February 3, 2008

An Uneasy Sleep Comments

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The lightning flashed outside the window
the thunder clapped shaking everything
I had the eerie feeling of something watching me.
The lightning forced shadows to dance around the room,
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David Harris
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JoAnn McGrath 03 February 2008

EW.....I was at the edge of my seat with heart pounding...right there with every move and every shadow....thinking how scared I used to be when I was young and a thunder storm rolled in....but you caught at the end...awwwww..MUM to the rescue of the after a bad fever breaks.....I like your poems that are almost short stories...thanks for a great read...hugs...lil sis

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