An Undisclosed Wishful Thought Poem by Khairul Ahsan

An Undisclosed Wishful Thought

Rating: 4.5

I never met you.
Yet, I know you so well!
Feel you so close!
Can hear you talk to me
Either in whispers or aloud,
So clear and compelling!

If ever I happen to see you someday,
And when our eyes would meet
And close in the comfort of hugs,
I wish so would meet our lips,
Not closed but a little parted,
To accommodate each others'!

Dhaka
16 October 2024

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 29 October 2024

'I wish so would meet our lips, ' Re use of 'so': I think 'so' here means 'likewise'/'also'. Good luck, Khairul, with your fantasy. : )))) bri

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Bri Edwards 29 October 2024

'To accommodate each others'.' Hmm, Khairul, each others' what? ? Tongue? ? You naughty boy. I think 'other's' is better, or use 'each other', meaning to satisfy one another without adding any spit or tongue or breathe mint to the other's mouth. ;))

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