Tuesday, August 25, 2009

An Unconditional Love Comments

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Every moment is a precious,
Unique and incredible
Gift of life!
A magnificient Sunset,
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Lalitha iyer 05 May 2010

the rains in summer, the rays in winter the shade of greens and the singing of cuckoo the pink of dawn and the inking of stars the silvering of moons the singing of brooks all are but only unconditional loves unconditionining us..........

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 11 February 2010

nicely written. Thanks for writing such a nice poem on this endangered species.. Keep writing :)

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Rachel Butler 22 September 2009

The eternal song of love Permeates all creation Each beat of our heart Pulses to this rhythem To know this grander love Rachel Ann Butler

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Ted M 25 August 2009

A beautiful composition. Interesting and wise words...............10

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Siddharth Singh 25 August 2009

you described unconditional love in a manner in which no human tongue succeeded. Very well done.

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i enjoyed this piece............. i agree.

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Catrina Heart 25 August 2009

Every moment is a precious, Unique and incredible Gift of life! A magnificient Sunset, The cool breeze, The laughter of a child, The warmth embrace of a friend…. ------------ lovely meaningful composition............10/10

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