This friendship between you and me
The love for me,
That I can see
Like honey and bee.
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So pure, so true. I like this poem very much...............but where are your other poems, dear Bhagabat? When I had your age, I wrote many many poems, also short and sometimes long, and I love the theme of LOVE also. Please, keep the ink flowing and your poems growing (in quantity AND quality) . The message about TRUE LOVE are always present in poems all the years. Beautiful poem. A 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++
Thank you madam, your message has the magic and power to change my thoughts and poems so much.A real thanks to you madam.I will try myself better than I can do this.
Hello Bhagabat, I love this poem for its strong message of true love. And you write it with firm conviction which i so admire. A beautiful poem........10 Thank you so much dear young poet for reading and commenting on my poem " Love is all embracing."
Nicely brought forth in good rhyme scheme with conviction. A beautiful love poem.
Like honey and bee. is our frienship. promises made in love. hope and pray that it lasts a life time.. very good poem. tony
Wow what a beautiful poem shared I enjoy your poem very nice
Great poem shared I enjoy your poem Thanks for sharing this poem
nice one @18 many guys change even you will o poet tree only3
You are my first You are my last, beautiful ideas. if it is lived for a life time. thank u dear poet. tony
Thanks dear for sharing budding lotus of friendship.It will spread its fragrance some day sure.
A compassionate piece of poetry, lovely and very passionate......