Sunday, October 12, 2008

An Unborn's Words Comments

Rating: 5.0

I remain for decades in darkness
Unconsciously only lapped
Then of ardent 'labour'
Strove to get out
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Green Peace
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Sathyanarayana M V S 31 May 2009

This has great depths. The allegory is well established.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 October 2008

Wonderful poem with depth. Very nice.10+

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Kesav Easwaran 20 October 2008

words, born wise of an unborn...philosophic, well 'conceived' 10

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