An Unborn Child's Poem Comments

Yes today I took my last little breath, never to have a chance to see, The possibilities that I can be, Because today was the day that my Mommy killed me! i simply screamed My God when i read the last lines. Abortion is such a great sin! ! ! tony this is a great poem . it moves all who read it. thank you.

very touching indeed, , , but like Lariel said, , , you to chose words that are seldom used, words that sometimes can give you two meanings at once...keep it up and i enjoyed it!

First of all, sorry if im very straight forward. But i am true to my words. This poem that you wrote is indeed very touching and inspiring, but from the start to the end, i feel as though i am reading a long length story in a book. if you can, try to improve it, using words that people dont often use and yet can make them feel your poem's expression. Because every poem has an expression and can be shown by words. I hope you understand what i mean, cause what you are trying to say here is very touching, and would be a strong poem...keep it up ^_^

This is really a great poem speaking about a very common phenomenon in the most uncommon way. The poem has fine imagery. I like and rate it 10. Thanks for sharing.....

thank you Naida, I hope that people would see it like you do. My intentions is not to offend anyone, just to help them see that life to each one of us is precious, and even in the womb your still a living being.

I AM CRYING WHILE READING THIS AND MAKING ME HUG MY SON TIGHTER I WISH EVERYONE WILL READ THIS AND REALIZE WHAT THEY DO BEFORE THEY ENGAGE IN MISTAKES. VERY MOVING, VERY TOUCHING. 10PLUS VOTES