An Unbloomed Dream Comments

Are 'His' and 'He' referring to 'God' or 'your Husband', ....OR to 'ME'? ? bri : )

........HEY! , PoemHUNTER, I'm 'hunting' for the comment I was working on when...POOF! ! ..PH (I guess) stole it. : (

I liked your lines 1-7. From line 8 onward I got a bit....OK, 'quite a bit', ......uncertain of your meaning, & failing to feel comfortable with my

Bharati, I've LOOKED but not FOUND 'decor' listed as a verb, only a noun, . So I will READ decor as 'decorate' in your poem! : )

I happy that poetess Magadha who has left this sphere has put a wonderful comment.

A fascinating poem on fleeting moments of life and dreams. Sweet expression! Loved reading it...5 stars

Real love is so strong that the dreams around it can happen at any moment. Beautiful poem on love.I would decor the million moments of my life.....

Vharati- this gem is on my fav poem list and I love re-reading it time after time- -it is great poetry that feels as fresh and lovely the 20th time as the first time.- - - - -> All the unuttered words / Pouring out from the secret chambers/ Of my heart, , < =- - - - - Only pure poetic genius can pen these words. 10 million stars for this beauty! ! ! I would string them like a pearl necklace

A beautiful poem! Don't do partiality please! I have read some of your poems but I have not yet received a return comment from you...OK madam please do as you feel...

Please read the famous speech of martin Luther king I have a dream

Necklace! ! Decoration! ! ! With my tears; Lace of life, A race to think of. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Necklace! ! Decoration!

This devotional poem is lovely, Bharati, and strikes me as right from the Bhakti tradition. -Glen

I just came by What a lovely summation by you BN THANKS At some point The Poet Poet came into being - -a great poet in a pseudo name and wants to remain anonymous.The poems he has created are like the fragrance of a rose and will never die.If he discards his pseudo name, perhaps we may not recognize him as we are familiar with his present status.Still I believe I can recognize him from his poems.

This is the high crest of poetic expression, dear poet, unfolding in one swell breath of ecstasy. I visited it again saw a different perspective and it looked more beautiful than before.

Bharati- - you continue to dazzle me with your poetic masterpieces and gentle heart and high-ranging intelligence. 10+++++++++++++++++++ onto my fav list

Such a beautifull poem. The devotion and the offering of words both come together to create a lovely presentation.

I can feel the emotions with which u have written this masterpiece....very beautiful mam

Hi Bharati. It is a beautiful thought. and best prayer when accomplished. very nice poem

Some thoughts arise from the subconscious on which we have little control, some are good thoughts but not all, if only we dedicate them to Him thru the medium of our dream... I liked this novel way of saying things.