An Unbearable Touch Of Pain Comments

Emotional words that you have pieced together. Great words Dannielle. Don't let anything stop you, struggles, battles... there is a way around everything! .

Thank you @Khairul, The reason as to why she is in so much pain and grief is because the depression is eating her alive, although it isn't mentioned, there's just basically a dark story behind it all; why she's in this much pain wasn't added. I hope that makes sense. Thank you, once again :)

She is great pains, understood, but why? The poem describes her pain well enough, to evoke readers' sympathy. Well written.

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Thank you for all your kind words everyone!

such pain and loss. its dark yet enlightening. please read some of mine and comment. :)

dark and foreboding.... lends a voice to the dark demons crept in crevices and crypts of the soul nice write liked

Full of emotion, a great poem.