Saturday, April 23, 2011

An Umbrella Comments

Rating: 5.0

Saves you from the sun and the rain,
It also protects your skin from pain,
Your skin remains smooth and fine,
No rashes are there and no line,
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir
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Alex Kult 16 July 2011

this is a really great poem. one of your best so far. keep writing fantastic poems :)

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Soma Mukherjee 13 July 2011

Well done, yes my sentiments exactly, with all the glam and glitter only your body will shine but a rusting soul needs compasion, understand and love...

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Mohammed Albalushi 13 July 2011

yes it saves our body but it cant cover our soul, wonderful decreaption about an umbrella +10

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Bahraich, U.P. India
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