Thursday, December 25, 2014

An Umbrella Comments

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You are like an umbrella on my head
You save me from thundering rain
I have to have you with me, instead
Even in hottest weather to abstain
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan
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Walterrean Salley 09 July 2015

No one in world is indispensable Every one is to play its part And then to leave being sensible This is the play to part and depart It's coming, it's coming. And your poem is a reminder. Thanks for sharing these words of truth in a poem.

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Salini Nair 26 December 2014

No one in world is indispensable Every one is to play its part And then to leave being sensible This is the play to part and depart great work sir...enjoyed

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Lorraine Colon 25 December 2014

An interesting and clever perception. Just as an umbrella shields us from nature's wrath, friends can provide protection from life's unpleasant circumstances. Excellent poem.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 25 December 2014

Head is just like umbrella and I need to change signify many things. Every one has to play his part and this can not be deviated at all. Wonderful poem shared on really.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Abbottabad Pakistan
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