An Ugly One Comments

I suspect if it's not out there yet, I will run across one of your published anthologies one day. Strong stuff, like coffee with just the right amount of not enough sugar. (If you knew how much I like coffee, you'd appreciate that thought more.) :)

This is a beautiful poem with love and sadness dripping from lines. Thanks for sharing.

Its a good narrative story, like a rhythmic diary..it goes flowing fine and clouded with packed of imagery..i think you wrote it very well