Saturday, September 6, 2014

An Outstanding Loan Comments

Rating: 5.0

The embryo smiled,
The first glimpse of the letter,
The first sigh of relief,
He read the subject,
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Valsa George 08 September 2014

Our indebtedness to many cannot be repaid fully..... We are ever in debt! This thought itself is so humbling! Many think that whatever we have gained are got through our own effort and we are the sole proprietors to all our possessions! A great message is conveyed through this beautiful write!

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 September 2014

Meaningful write. Very true said in few lines..... You are indebted of, The Humanity, Your creditor, Otherwise The Humanity, Keeps the right, To auction to any creature, The highest bidder, Of your mortgaged soul! Beautiful way you have depicted life...Loved the imagery of words. Loved reading it.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 07 September 2014

Loan granted and outstanding loan a great symbolism of life a well penned poem with the remainder ...life is what..... kudos 10

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Salini Nair 07 September 2014

fantastic write......like it

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Salini Nair 07 September 2014

fantastic write.......................like it

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Khalida Bano Ali 06 September 2014

Mirza Ghalib Jan dee dee hui usi ki thee Hq to yun haiy ke haq ada na hua

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