You say you are an orphan unto life, ..
But I'm an orphan unto love.
You refuse to give me another chance,
But soon you will be my past;
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Excellent write! Very emotional, as it comes truly from the heart, it's like a great piece of art, well coloured, and well written, I take my hate off for your far imagination, keep up the good work, and settings will be alright, hope you the best wishes my brother.
very beautiful Peter! I love everything about your poem it flows with truth and soul like an invisible force of love and love only. It is beautiful! This is what I feel when I read your poem Peter.
A sad, but very well written poem Peter.