Thursday, August 23, 2012

An Orphan Unto Love Comments

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You say you are an orphan unto life, ..
But I'm an orphan unto love.
You refuse to give me another chance,
But soon you will be my past;
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Peter Daniel Phiri
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John Brown 02 October 2012

A sad, but very well written poem Peter.

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Babatunde Aremu 22 September 2012

Great poem from emotional feeling. Keep writing

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Marieta Maglas 11 September 2012

nice sad poem -thank you for sharing

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Valerie Dohren 01 September 2012

A heartfelt plea, a lovely write.

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Abdallah Gamal 01 September 2012

Excellent write! Very emotional, as it comes truly from the heart, it's like a great piece of art, well coloured, and well written, I take my hate off for your far imagination, keep up the good work, and settings will be alright, hope you the best wishes my brother.

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Kasia Fedyk 23 August 2012

very beautiful Peter! I love everything about your poem it flows with truth and soul like an invisible force of love and love only. It is beautiful! This is what I feel when I read your poem Peter.

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