Wednesday, October 26, 2011

An Orphan Child Comments

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I was alone on the roads and streets,
Almost in the whole world.
I lived in a hut,
With a roof cut.
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Mridul Upadhyay
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Sajna Kailas 29 October 2011

oh my God! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! it is very pain to read. how dreadful is life without our parents and their care and shelter.i loved the poem. makes my mind melts in the feel. gud work Mridul upadhyay. your name is very nice! ! ! !

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Vipins Puthooran 26 October 2011

It's an amazing poem, You written it so beautifully, it prooves your poetical talent, I like this very much, top marks! 10+++

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