An Ordinary Man Comments

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A beautiful poem written by a gifted ordinary man! Enjoyed your dreamy ride with the fairy along the milky way! A 10

An ordinary man can not write a poem like this...only an extraordinary man can marvel like this...you are great Akhtar...very amusing poem...like a lot...thanks a lot for this fantastic work

I know I am not the best, but, I know, too..an ordinary man can work wonders..Loved your poem dear poet..10

A well written, hopeful poem for all to read and admire. You've captured what it means not to expected anything from the universe. In time what's there to happen will unfold. I liked this very much. A real joy to read.