Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, April 26, 2011

An Ordinary Man Comments

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I am no saint but an ordinary man
Do the things in simple manner and as much as I can
I need not become a person in white clad dress
I sometimes miss a God and do not find trace
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2012

very well Robert Essex10 minutes ago it was a very well wrote poem Comment +1 Very very nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2012

Kevin Napier10 minutes ago I really like the flow of this poem and the momentum it builds. If you have heard some poets read their work a loud and heard them build momentum in their voice you know what I'm talking about. Very impressive. Comment +1 Man here can be seen still as a very ambitious one....

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2012

This interesting work could use some editing.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2012

Kevin8 minutes ago I related to the sentiment, but felt it was over-written. Contemplating the essence of the theme may both shorten an

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 April 2011

To miss a kind eye is biggest sin Without love you can enjoy no win God clearly emphasizes on love and sympathy You then deserve his blessings and mercy

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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