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***` **, *.. Excellent poem sahab

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raj malik what a nice way of expressing ideas

raj malik what a nice way of expressing ideas

aradhana verma superb well expressed

v rajen palan wow. what innocent feelings. well expressed

excellent Michelle Bay6 minutes ago well structured and descriptive poem. Very good Comment +1

Cherie Wallace6 minutes ago I think it would be better without the first stanza and I do not like how she is nature's child in the beginning. I do not like that because I do not think I understand that. The poem needs some adjectives to describe and clarify her transformation. Colors and the kind of imagery that describes touch could be a welcome addition as well. There are a few touch-imagery allusions, but I think more would improve it. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago moe you enjoy with deletion of any pra of poem. that is beauty in it and it will remain still

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love the word play Kayla Saffell10 minutes ago excellent use of wording, I enjoyed it very much Comment +1 . .

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wordy Skidmark Watson10 minutes ago Lots of content Comment +1 Good!

1 Good! Ophelia Spot10 minutes ago I enjoyed reading this piece. Comment +1 Not sure your intention

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