An Open Window Comments

Wow! Impressive! I LOVE this! Glued to it, word-after-word, line-after-line, drinking in all the scenery and imagery, the sights, and almost the sounds, the sentiments, culminating in....Frustration! What a perfect surprise ending! Beautifully done! Wonderful! I very much enjoyed all you presented, taking the reader with you to enjoy this all. Delightful! ! ! ! So aptly titled too, as an 'open window'....a window on your world, which was a window on so much else. Excellent!

In the peace of nature, in the normality of daily routine among people, 'a open window' revealed to you the passion of lovers hug. What is behind that window is above our understanding, is the nature taking its course as God let it be, it's the life following the path.Well penned poem..Cristina Teodor