Monday, June 21, 2010
An Open Eye Comments
Rating: ★4.3
You didn't open eyes or looked at me
We were under the shed of the tree
The sweet fragrance was filling the air
I was slipping into memory with split hair
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Argum Sheth
22 June 2010
vYou didn't open eyes or looked at me We were under the shed of the tree The sweet fragrance was filling the air..partial observation with one eye....10
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7/27/2025 7:32:29 AM # 1.0.0
Nicely Written..! ! appreciate the way the feelings expressed in every stanza. Thank you Poet! 10+++!