An Open Book Comments

Nice comparisons here. Lovely write, enjoyed reading it very much. Nice flow too. Love Ernestine XXX

And you have held the pen well.I loved all of this and the part that stuck out most for me was'Heartache and sorrow, many things may go wrong. The paper may tear but the pages are strong. This is so good I will try to learn from your tallents.Love Duncan

Like this poem, like the metiphore and I love the last line. It leaves you with that wonderful image. You are holding the pen. - INVICTUS 'I am the master of my fate: I am the Captain of my soul' Gary

I loved this one Sylvia, what a clever write. I love the thought of life being a book and you turn each page as you go along. Lovely story. a pleasure to read. Love Ernestine XXX