Wednesday, June 5, 2013

An Olive Morning Comments

Rating: 5.0

It rained all night
Slow drizzle like sweet dreams streaming in droopy eyes
Till a thunderstorm bursts with lightning like a bad dream
Eyes open with a shock, traumatized sleepy mind tries to peek in darkness
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Savita Tyagi
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Akhtar Jawad 06 September 2014

A beautiful descriptive poem a night of thunder of rain followed by a sunny day.

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Valsa George 03 August 2013

This is an extremely beautiful poem, Savita! The fury of a night with thunder and rain and the break of a beautiful dawn with all the greens washed clean and looking greener! Some accompanying philosophical observations about life too! Altogether, a feast for the mind! !

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 05 June 2013

The properties have more values than human life...the interest of humanity in the heart of this poet.well written.

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