An Old Story Comments

It is really beautiful in the sense it expresses the real feelings of an individual about something which happened in the past & hence is called old, but never that old in the reality perceived by the mind!

Well written story..tree, bird and the rope fruits and the hidden meaning accentuate the beauty of poem..+++10

I'm still here at the same place, but miles away in time, Take a bow dear poet. A brilliant poem by all means! Salute!

but (miles) away in time, ....may be light years away., ... nice story compose more kids will love it

AAAHHHH! ! ! Now that is poetry! ! ! A song from the heart of old. Sweet, Everlasting and, I might say, there is a little of Rabindranath Tagore within those words. Very nice. No! Very delightful. Very touching. Soul inspiring. Thank you, Lynn

She liked the old story when it was new, so she might like it now, as new again. Probably not, though. It never seems to work that way. Either way, is good story.

Dear poet, Very good poem. it is narrated by an old tree. As poetry's uniqueness it is apt for our country or a old lady by hidden meaning. the old tree may be a symbol. well penned and my wishes