Tuesday, November 1, 2011

An Old Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’m not like other children my age.
The children my age are precarious fools,
Whose actions are unjustified.
I don’t understand why they do as they do,
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Lenore Lee
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Winged Leopard 15 February 2012

I understand how you feel, i am the same

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Danny Draper 15 February 2012

I like this thoughtful piece, free of form like the honest emotions expressed. Most poets are old souls as comes with the malady of being a poet. Friends are everywhere as face book will attest. But true and good friends are rare, and few as it should be. As Paul Kelly said, some friends have risen and some have moved on. This is the nature of the journey. We may only ever sustain a few good friends. People that will give you their meal, their only shirt, and an honest opinion carefully proffered. Nice writing.

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