Monday, August 1, 2011

An Old, Scratched, Blemished Poem [performance][experimental] Comments

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A poem so aged
Momentarily wrinkled, smudged
A poem read so much
Trouble of translation of
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R.K. Cowles
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Bonnie Lundgren 01 August 2011

Quite a unique poem. Your use of [skip] was effective, except that it grew slightly tiring after your near-excessive use. Sometimes I can tell which word the missing letters are taken from, sometimes not. The title is perfect, however. It really has an interesting sound and made me want to read the poem.

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R.K. Cowles

R.K. Cowles

hudson falls, new york
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