Sunday, September 16, 2018

An Old Razor (In A Photograph) Comments

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Michael Mc Dermott
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Bill Wright 17 September 2018

Succinct and to the point. Maybe if you had added a few more verses, perhaps a bit more description of the razor, likewise with the guillotine then perhaps pulling the two of them together in a final verse where you compare the jobs of the two of them? Just a thought.

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michael 17 September 2018

hello Billy. It was just an off the cuff reaction to a photograph of what might have been an old cut throat razor with an inscription that had a lot of numbers and letters. Anyway I will try what you suggest and thanks for your comments

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Rajnish Manga 16 September 2018

Thanks for sharing the poem with an intriguing analogy.

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