Succinct and to the point. Maybe if you had added a few more verses, perhaps a bit more description of the razor, likewise with the guillotine then perhaps pulling the two of them together in a final verse where you compare the jobs of the two of them? Just a thought.
hello Billy. It was just an off the cuff reaction to a photograph of what might have been an old cut throat razor with an inscription that had a lot of numbers and letters. Anyway I will try what you suggest and thanks for your comments
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Succinct and to the point. Maybe if you had added a few more verses, perhaps a bit more description of the razor, likewise with the guillotine then perhaps pulling the two of them together in a final verse where you compare the jobs of the two of them? Just a thought.
hello Billy. It was just an off the cuff reaction to a photograph of what might have been an old cut throat razor with an inscription that had a lot of numbers and letters. Anyway I will try what you suggest and thanks for your comments