Friday, May 5, 2006

An Old Memory Comments

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It's an old memory
It's a bad dream
Brought back by forces unseen
At times, only to remind me
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Guarded Heart
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Tracey Collins 05 May 2006

well writen poem, yes its nice to be in LOVE and happy, forget bad times and look to good times and everybody wiil win.

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Goldy Locks 05 May 2006

this one spoke deeply to me. you have a heartfelt way with words. i can't wait to be at that moment when i feel happy (this one might benefit from a slower pace & more intricate line verse) seems rushed, Sus.

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