It's an old memory
It's a bad dream
Brought back by forces unseen
At times, only to remind me
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this one spoke deeply to me. you have a heartfelt way with words. i can't wait to be at that moment when i feel happy (this one might benefit from a slower pace & more intricate line verse) seems rushed, Sus.
well writen poem, yes its nice to be in LOVE and happy, forget bad times and look to good times and everybody wiil win.