An Old Mans Lament Comments

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There are sone technical problems here but they are dominated by the mature use of phrasing. I do not find this kind of talent that often. Greenwolfe 1962

Wonderful ending and poem. Thanks for the smile! - chuck

I loved this poem, I work with old people and I can see the content very clearly, cheers Sylvie

This is wonderful, Bridgid. You captured the poignant and playfully spat it out in brilliant form. Excellent work. My warmest regards and respect, CJ

Well I started to comment then had to do a retake to see what on, this must be catching or something, although this is a serious subject, taken in context its an excellent poem. Regards Graham.(I think)

Another brilliant and sad but funny poem. A couple of the stanza's need some attention to the mitre and rythm. Read it aloud a few times and you will see what I mean. Nothing that can't be easily fixed though. Very cool love Gyp's

Lordy, Lordy, look who's well past 40...if I had money for every time I have opened the cabinet door, and can't remember what I went there for, I would be very rich. This really tickled my funny bone. Linda

A very clever and humorously compassionate look at aging. As one not quite in my dotage, I am not sure I look forward to aging much more! Well-written. All the best, Hugh