An old man sitting under a tree
Sees much further than a boy
standing on top of a tree
An old man sittting at the bottom of a mountain
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Great poem! It is well written and the message is understood of a old man sitting under a tree who's more experienced and wiser than a boy sitting on top of a tree who's not.
Sagacity of old age is beautifully and appealingly captured in the poem. A great piece of work, focused and factual. Thanks for sharing Qiniso.
Sees much further than a boy, excellent written, congrats and thanks for sharing the poem with us
I love this poem about wisdom in the older man. Well deserved Poem of theday, congratulations
Wow such a brilliant write filled with wisdom.....congrats for being chosen....10+++
The Youth! ! They refuse to listen to advice! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A nice write with a meaningful message. Youth could learn wisdom from the elderly.
a poem with good advice for those young people that would like to grow old? ..............wonderfully written Qiniso
Many got into trouble because of ignorance..many die also because of ignorant. Thank you for sharing. Congratulations.
Congratulatios dear Qiniso for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
So true of today's society. They try to reshape the world without the wisdom to do so. They are arrogant and will not listen and learn from those of the past or present. They refuse the Wisdom Giver. Very revealing and sadly true. Thanks my dear friend.10+++
So much truth in this poem. Youth no longer listen to the elders and as you described so clearly we have many social ills. Bravo.
An old man seating at the bottom of a mountain under a tree thinking so much and boy interacts. Amazing modern story poem is brilliantly presented is perceptional...10
An insighful ballad tganks for sharing I enjoyed it a lot. Great write and message in this poem