Saturday, October 14, 2017

An Old Man Sitting Under A Tree Comments

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An old man sitting under a tree
Sees much further than a boy
standing on top of a tree
An old man sittting at the bottom of a mountain
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Qiniso Mogale
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A B Faniki 30 September 2019

An insighful ballad tganks for sharing I enjoyed it a lot. Great write and message in this poem

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Brian Taylor 27 May 2019

Great poem! It is well written and the message is understood of a old man sitting under a tree who's more experienced and wiser than a boy sitting on top of a tree who's not.

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Qiniso Mogale 29 May 2019

I thank you dear poet.

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Chinedu Dike 29 March 2018

Sagacity of old age is beautifully and appealingly captured in the poem. A great piece of work, focused and factual. Thanks for sharing Qiniso.

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Lea- Beima Dorestin 09 November 2017

Direct and precise Well done!

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Rini. 09 November 2017

Congratulations for poem of the day Quiniso.. Nicely written

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Jette Blackstone 09 November 2017

Wisdom is very valuable. Thanks for sharing your poem.

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Muzahidul Reza 09 November 2017

Sees much further than a boy, excellent written, congrats and thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Sarah Persson 09 November 2017

I love this poem about wisdom in the older man. Well deserved Poem of theday, congratulations

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 November 2017

Wow such a brilliant write filled with wisdom.....congrats for being chosen....10+++

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 November 2017

The Youth! ! They refuse to listen to advice! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 November 2017

A nice write with a meaningful message. Youth could learn wisdom from the elderly.

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Ruta Mohapatra 09 November 2017

Wisdom comes with age. Nicely written.

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Tom Allport 09 November 2017

a poem with good advice for those young people that would like to grow old? ..............wonderfully written Qiniso

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Upendra Upm 09 November 2017

congratulations Young should listen to old.

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Sy Wong 09 November 2017

Many got into trouble because of ignorance..many die also because of ignorant. Thank you for sharing. Congratulations.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 November 2017

Congratulatios dear Qiniso for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Chris Embrick 14 October 2017

So true of today's society. They try to reshape the world without the wisdom to do so. They are arrogant and will not listen and learn from those of the past or present. They refuse the Wisdom Giver. Very revealing and sadly true. Thanks my dear friend.10+++

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Michael Hopkins 14 October 2017

So much truth in this poem. Youth no longer listen to the elders and as you described so clearly we have many social ills. Bravo.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2017

An old man seating at the bottom of a mountain under a tree thinking so much and boy interacts. Amazing modern story poem is brilliantly presented is perceptional...10

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