An Old Man's Saga Comments

True, I find all the known words and expressions incompetent to translate the mood and emotions your verse has induced in me A pilot and an escort is getting ready within my mind. Excited and delighted, saddened and despondently lost all feeble knots of discernment, and a new heavy drop of insight has dropped over the colorless surface of my soul, causing ceaseless cadence, an amazingly rolling and swelling army of ripples moves to 360 degree of life span! ... i must sit silently in a cool cage scattering these emotions around and pick them to sort at its heights and shapes to make the most wonderful castle of appreciation for these cute, but enthralling word-domain you have invited innocent eyes like mine. God bless.. wait... the purest stream of unnamed passions yet to flow breaking the soft turf of time and its pale tall roots. Only the blessed descent of heavenly slant shower has to rift the dark mighty agitation of the boiling sea by the forlorn verges of skies and lands... wait.... Admit with all humbleness, and submit with prayers. Again.. wait.

very good writing, I like it, thanks. please read my poems and comment.