Saturday, May 17, 2014

An Old Man's Prayer Comments

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One day while going through a very difficult time in my life I had this old black gentleman offer to pray for me. To the best of my ability and recollection I have tried to share his prayer with you. I have purposefully used his words and dialect language and tried to capture more of the spiritual beauty and meaning of his prayer. I mean no disrespect, but my utmost appreciation for the spirit and the love I sensed through this man's prayer.


He said; "Son, yah' look mighty troubled,
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Loyd C Taylor Sr
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Tajudeen Shah 25 May 2014

A very sensible prayer, genuine, from the core of one's soul, only such words can change man the often wandering refined 'savage'. You are so considerate dear Loyd, that made you find some time to review my humble attempt, and that too highly inspiring. that too is a kind of prayer to me. prayers add power and increase responsibilities, confidence start to bubble within owing to prayers/prayer like expressions. God Bless. Old and young alike may enjoy the benefits of prayers like you experienced.

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Valsa George 24 May 2014

A beautiful prayer that lifted up your weary spirits...... Blessed be the old man! Yes, when we give our cares to God, our burden will be lifted.... Enjoyed this uplifting poem!

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