Thursday, October 13, 2011

An Old Man Comments

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On my way
I saw an old man
Was walking,
A heavy bag
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Sumanta Roy
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Emmanuel Damilola Adeyemo 27 October 2011

tight ending man! kip movin

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Vipins Puthooran 19 October 2011

The words that you placed orderly and had a good flow of lines.. But you could have written a lot of things about that old man and what you written here were excellent.. A good poem!

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