Thursday, December 8, 2005

An Old Flame Comments

Rating: 3.8

A clown's smiles dressed in frowns
A lover's bait in a tattered gown

The sky above turns everything brown
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Hubert J. Humperdink
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Aldo Kraas 10 February 2007

Not too bad For a new poet

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Elya Thorn 02 January 2006

I love this poem, it's very cryptic, I love the words you used and the imagery is very consistent!

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