Thursday, June 9, 2005

An Old Fart Comments

Rating: 1.9

Driving my fancy automobile,
down a Nevada country road,
asking myself 'how do you feel'
running over a sleepy toad.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Elysabeth Faslund 12 July 2007

Which lovely lady? ? You were certainly 'touring' here! It's funny, it's wild, it's free...the magic combination! ! Well done, excellent story, and warm nights read beteen the lines! . Of course! ! Great! xxElysabeth

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 11 September 2005

Cool poem Herbert.....I enjoyed the ride! ;)

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Herbert Nehrlich1 10 June 2005

Carter I have asked you nicely to stay away from my poems. I am not in the least interested in what you think about them. I will ask administration to stop you from commenting. If you do not and administration will not I will see you in court. Your accusation of plagiarism warrants a verdict that will cost you a lot of money. I am interested in peace on this site, if you are not I will make sure you will remember your mistakes. H

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Herbert Nehrlich1 09 June 2005

* For our American cousins and spellcheckers, carburettors are carburetors, the British ones have one more letter and one less gene. H

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Herbert Nehrlich1 09 June 2005

Resident spouse remembers her Triumph Spitfire of 1970. Temperamental, British unreliability (always electrical and carburettor* surprises) but fun when it 'blasted'. Hx A cad? Allan you must write a poem about that. Was he sad, mad or glad....this cad...... H

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Scarborough Gypsy 09 June 2005

Oh Thanks Herbie, that was lovely. Made me smile and laugh. I will read it ot to the gal's in the office on Monday. Loved the image of the top down and beer on the seat. Used to have a Triamph Herald convertable (in UK) and loved having the top down with beer on the sear and a picnic strapped to the rac on the back. Lovely feel good poem, just as I like them. Gyp's xx

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Allan James Saywell 09 June 2005

VERY GOOD HERBERT THE ENGLISH WILL LOVE THIS ONE THEY USED TO SAY HE IS A CAD, BUT FART IS JUST AS GOOD AND IT HAS FOUR LETTERS Warm regards AJS

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