Friday, November 24, 2006

An Old Bicycle Comments

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Look! How it leans against the wall!
Picking up dust, dropping down rust
It used to be his legs of steel
To school, to church, to his girl’s house
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LLM Mbatha
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Tia Maria 05 July 2008

another poem perfectly painted... thank you I really enjoy reading yours and visualise every line... you really are talented

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Aasiq the poet 22 May 2007

top class lungelo..ones eyes moisten as it is the grand pa who is being described, and not an old bicycle.. ..regards.. a t p

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Aashish Ameya 24 November 2006

all i can say is this poem is great, when one can able to pick up this little thigs which made our life so beautiful then true poetry happend...good work

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LLM Mbatha

LLM Mbatha

kwa-Zulu, SA
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