An Old Banyan Tree Comments

he could have died or move away or changing time

It is true, wisdom and knowledge can be derived from nature, which is ancient, even from an old banyan tree if you take an open view of it deeply. Good for a deep thought.

Yes..he is a banyan with aerial roots...alive immortal spirit...old is gold indeed...your poem too

an emotional piece.. fine penned.

He had the evidences of time. A lot of knowledges and experiences. Wonderful thought process....I liked your topic.......loved it....10++ - Brishti

kafil....superb poem.... you almost brought teers to my eyes...it was such a banyan tree under which i started school was it a tree...oh i am sorry no my friend it was a an age old spirit...it stood proud and wise and ageless...welcoming to all...the birdc the bee... a beauty for all to see i sourly miss my primary school, shady haven, environment heaven... some day i too will write about it you brought back old memmories yet as vivid as the florid parakeets that squacked on its branches.... the shafts of illumination that filtered through its twisted branches and roots....caught me in awe very nice and touchinfg piece.... aspecial marvel for the subcontinent cheers and ten

vivid and fine expressions. well done 10+

Yes, old is gold, old friend is like old banyan tree that gives cool shadows. Marvelous poem,10+++