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It was not supposed to be this way. An albatross has staged
itself in all my living arenas, where I once felt so comfortable-
where I had meditated myself to a kind of peace, despite. I
accepted it all as a peace despite. Aside, from the albatross:
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Imaginative with too much of the same. The blame game ialways targets phantoms of the mind. Have you tried a conventional formatted poem? More attention to spelling wouldn't hurt.
It's difficult to edit stuff on this site. The text format box is cagey and tight, annoying and exacting. In another mood, at another time, I will edit. But this one actually comes from the heart and is trying to explain something I just don't exactly know how to explain.
Hi Julia..I am going to re read your poem as it has several layers of meanings, and my brain seems to be stuck in neutral. Aggravates me, if not today, will try again tomorrw. Heat wave in California Panagiota Romios
I have to admit this is a tough one. Very abstract and vague- I found the weather here in CA kind of balmy and windy today, even though VERY HOT/ But the wind amidst the scorched was a nice breather.
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7/18/2025 8:53:10 PM # 1.0.0
It's 5am here in CA and now my AC went out. Holy Cow. I re-read your poem. Still in the dark! I feel so ignorant, . Sorry. Japanese poem forms throw me at times. I would not down you or any Poet here ever. Can't we correct one another in private, somehow. I am great at spelling errors, Vision problems and being on an iPad do not help, I understand about the formatting issues. But ~ seems to me to are highly gifted and a deep thinker.))