I was very depressed what i did
thinking about how the day was it
had lot tension in my mind
i wanted to relax but i can't
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A meaningful poem.....................................................
A lively piece but how could you write it so well being a school girl? (and if you drop 'is' in second line, it will give clearer meaning. :))
lovely and meaningful poem. fears and tensions are well expressed. thank you. tony