Friday, June 10, 2011

' An Office Women' Comments

Rating: 2.7

I was very depressed what i did
thinking about how the day was it
had lot tension in my mind
i wanted to relax but i can't
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Fatima Obaid
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Dr Antony Theodore 15 November 2015

lovely and meaningful poem. fears and tensions are well expressed. thank you. tony

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Khalida Bano Ali 05 September 2015

A meaningful poem.....................................................

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Yasmin Khan 24 June 2013

A lively piece but how could you write it so well being a school girl? (and if you drop 'is' in second line, it will give clearer meaning. :))

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