An Odious Adieu Comments

Hello Rahul another wonderful poem i enjoyed reading it Very well written

Logs left behind tell this story nicely.

a nice poem.well narated.thanx sharing surya

a significant poem...well written...nice piece...

very good and straightforward words! we have to take care love and nature in balance! keep writing!

Very thought provoking and true to life....you are appreciated during the productive part of the life cycle and then consigned to the forgotten past....Keep writing Rahul

Nature in full circle.. Nicely portrayed in the cycle of life... I bid you adieu.. :) Wendy

a meaningful piece rahul...so much to ponder on...10

The story of life well put here today gone tomorrow

The story of life well put here today gone tomorrow

Vary well written. thanks for the good read.

Nicely written as if from the heart of the tree

very well penned indeed

Nice touch my friend....loved the imagery as you painted this romantic scene....nicely penned and well painted

lovely and romantic! let's hear Beethoven's L'Adieu Piano Sonata when read this words! keep writing!

greet poem reminding the pujabi poet baqi siddiqui of pakistan. mein wun da sangna boota thandian merian chhanwa......lovely images rana

The message you convey is clear..........If you are not useful to society the society forgets you..........in this selfish world.......Good Write.....10+++

It Was Intersting I Rarely Read About Trees Being Depressed So I'm Guessing That The Tree In This Text Is A Symbol Of You Or Someone You Are Close With.

Everything is lost now...well it's not... a tree recycles itself w/ it's seeds. It shouldn't be this depressing to be a tree unless it's going to be made into toilet paper...or tissue.

its wonderful..... too much thoughtful and i am proud (being so close) that i can understand all this rhymeless rhyme keep writing