An Ode To Your Beauty -04 Comments

Your looks vis-a-vis had pulled away Me out of me... Nicely penned ode. 10++

Your looks vis-a-vis had pulled away Me out of me... The Earth and the sky and the Ocean Nothing existed around. Nothing except that beauty celestial Emanating from your eyes Filling elegance around me. Trying to confuse me with a new look singing the same tone? But I won't. Your art of writing is great. Thanks for it.10++.

On that moment Time froze And the Ocean Paused to breathe And tried reading My eyes and me, What were the feelings That thrilled and chilled me! ! wow.. beautiful stanza. I feel excited at the style of writing. 10 marks to award.

The Earth and the sky and the Ocean Nothing existed around. Nothing except that beauty celestial Emanating from your eyes Filling elegance around me. Beautiful poem Subhas... At last rain came to your world after so many weeks.. I thank the cloud responsible for this. Yours Neetu

Your looks vis-a-vis had pulled away Me out of me... Yes, one misses a heart beat or two in that moment, , , youwrite so natural. Iloved this poem very much. Nothing except that beauty celestial Emanating from your eyes Filling elegance around me. Your words turn divinely elegant here. Thanks for sharing it.