Thursday, July 21, 2011

An Ode To WıNe Comments

Rating: 5.0

aan universal anecdote on pain
In frustration you are a companion
In limit you are an elixir and potion
A must you are in our celebrations
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Ratnakar Mandlik
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An enjoyable read. The imagery leads me into a thought provoking piece, your style is gripping and commands the mind to wake up and absorb its content. A spell and grammar software is a wonderful tool and I use it before a piece is submitted on my singular pieces or my books. This small thing with grammar and spelling does not overshadow your genius in creating poetry. 1. aan universal anecdote on pain (spelling “an” and capitalize first word “An”. 2. Born you sre for the sublimation (spelling “sre? ? ?) 3. Notion of producing you from foodgrains, (food grains, two words) 4. Keeping crores hungryfor the gains (crores (unknown to me and hungry for, two words.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 October 2015

Red wine is for your health. Nice work.

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Ramesh Rai 03 March 2014

A praise for the divine drink in vedas thenafter so many to your pen.

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Ratnakar Mandlik

Ratnakar Mandlik

Hyderabad(A.P.) , India
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