When I hear an obituary announcement
Over the Public Address Equipment,
I no more feel keen to know who passed away;
I just accept that it must be one of us
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Beautiful journey of life that shared a few moments with someone known while others unknown. Its a journey of joy, sadness and many more. Finally ending in Peace! Beautiful Ode to Predecessors!
To hear an obituary is to feel the sadness of another comrade in this life departed to the Hereafter, another searching soul looking for happiness along a journey of joy, disappointments, love, hate and achievement all rolled into one memorable journey along a path of obstacles and at last finding the path of peace and love! Brilliant write!
I am truly enlightened by your thoughts, dear poet Hazel Durham. Thank you for visiting me and sharing your thoughts on my poem. Much inspired.
The life that we call Hereafter! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Yes, thanks for quoting the last line of the poem, @Edward Kofi Louis. And thanks too, for your nice comment on two of my other poems. Stay Blessed, my friend!
Thus one by one will pass away leaving memories we will open windows in mind and looking at the open space will remember them, .... an excellent tribute to the predecessors
Thank you, poet Muzahidul Reza, for spending some time to read my poem and for leaving the first comment here. My poem has been enriched by your thoughtful comment.
@Geetha Jayakumar, Thank you so much for reading my poem and leaving a thoughtful comment here. Much appreciate your kind comment.