The beginning of a newly found life
A radiantly, beautiful soon-to-be mother
A face that radiates beauty, grace, and glows
Now turned to the pains of labor
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It's beautiful, and it DOES describe the beauty that is motherhood, but perhaps you should continue. Motherhood lasts a lifetime, not just until graduation, talk about the pain of seeing them move out, and the joy you feel when you watch them become parents themselves perhaps. Just my two cents.
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It's beautiful, and it DOES describe the beauty that is motherhood, but perhaps you should continue. Motherhood lasts a lifetime, not just until graduation, talk about the pain of seeing them move out, and the joy you feel when you watch them become parents themselves perhaps. Just my two cents.