An Ode To Silence Comments

There's genuine music in your poem from the way you construct these parallel stanzas. You exert just enough control to make the pattern work as a series of musical phrases. From my point of view you have found a better way to make word music than using tired old rhymes. I write unrhymed sonnets! Your poem doesn't try to give a dict'y definition of silence (GOOD MOVE!) but rather conveys its impression through imagery, and that's what real poetry does in our modern age.

Wonderful! ! ! Loved the piece.

Silence of times demands one to stop and think about the value of silence! Nice write :)

nicely written...keep it up