Friday, March 3, 2006

An Ode To Our Trees Comments

Rating: 3.9

Hey you standing their, with your arms into the sky.
and the rest of you, standing firm on the ground.
They say you are naked, in winter time.
When the frost comes calling, and the snows all around.
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sylvia spencer
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qwe rty 14 May 2006

to many people are taking our forests for granted and if this contiues there won't be any more paper to right such great poems as this good job

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R H 13 May 2006

Sylvia, this is an ode indeed, loved these two lines in particular: 'Then she becomes one of her proud evergreens and you become lost into, her winter scenes, ' Your personification of nature rang through. Thank you for guiding me to this one. Warmest wishes, Justine.

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Duncan Wyllie 08 March 2006

You have showed great concern and great passion for natures beauty.A just poem I think.Love Duncan

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