Tuesday, October 13, 2015

An Ode To Nature Comments

Rating: 4.9

In serene guise a celestial beauty
You profess principle of equality.
Embodiment of benevolence,
At times you are cruelty's essence.
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Ratnakar Mandlik
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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 April 2023

I have already read and appreciated this fascinating ode dear poet. It gives me immense pleasure to revisit this wonderful ode...a spledid poem!

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Chinedu Dike 03 April 2021

A thoughtful piece of poetry written with clarity of thought and mind.

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Bri Edwards 28 August 2019

2 – " master" ? i'm used to thinking of 'Mother Nature'. [[ but I found this in a Google posting: “..In practice master (particularly as a verb) is used in many contexts where dominance is more relevant than gender, …” ]] a fickle 'master' indeed. bri :) to MyPoemList

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Bri Edwards 28 August 2019

1 – “awe” is a good word for the topic! " mot•ley incongruously varied in appearance or character; disparate." [ a 'new' word adjective for me? ] " Devastating then becomes it's rampage. [ use its, not it's, of course. ] Cloud bursts and deluge on one hand On other are parched human n parched land." [ i think 'n' is considered proper ]

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 July 2019

Oh bountiful and beloved creator/Lovable are your acts as the provider.......this is fabulous ode to nature so close to my heart! My great pleasure reading it time and again!

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Jane Campion 21 June 2019

A thoughtful ode. Thank you for commenting.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 June 2019

A fabulous ode dear poet! I would love to see it among top poems sooner or later!

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Savita Tyagi 29 May 2019

Lovely poem. Nature’s benevolence and wreath go hand in hand. But a burnt forest brings out the beautiful spring growth.

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Prabir Gayen 18 May 2019

Embodiment of benevolence, ... Beautiful expression...thanks

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 April 2019

A wonderful ode to nature. Its beauty and wrath is for everyone. Where the principle of equality is manifested. A perceptive and well crafted write.

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 March 2019

excellent poetic expression......

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Jennifer Birchall 18 March 2019

A wonderful poem showing the extremes of nature.

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 February 2019

Nature always draw one's attention, and a good poem more so. Thanks for sharing.

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Bipasha D 04 February 2019

A well written poem on a topic which is close to my heart.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 December 2018

This is a wonderful ode! A work of art! It deserves to be among top few poems!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 October 2018

A great poem dear poet! My pleasure revisiting it. I will find time to read some of your other beautiful poems.. I appreciate the way you pen!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 October 2018

Ode is one of the most difficult forms of poetry! You have wonderfully handled it! Beautifully structured! My favorite lines: Oh bountiful and beloved creator/Lovable are your acts as the provider! I have just written two such type of poems! If you could find time, please pay a visit to my poem Ode to My Conscience'. For this magnificent poem-10

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Britte Ninad 17 May 2018

excellent versification....+++10

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Sphoothi Theatre 27 July 2017

Liked the subtlety of the poem which so true of the nature too

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Rajnish Manga 12 July 2017

This is just awesome. Nature has its own ways to act- sometimes lovable and sometimes vengeful, sometimes protecting and sometimes destructing. Thanks for a great ode on Nature. In serene guise a celestial beauty At times you are cruelty's essence. Lovable are your acts as the provider. Awesome are your forms when in rage,

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Ratnakar Mandlik

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