for every moan that escaped you during my birth
every bit of my flesh i owe to you 'O Mother'
in great pain did you bear me for my existence
all my pain belittles in front of you ' O Mother '
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A mother's hug lingers long after she has let go... I enjoyed reading your poem, very nice write... Peace and love always...
Rigzin this is a very nice, deep and beautiful poem, surely i can feel how precious your feelings toward your mother! ! really a gem among the gem...but dear friend, its better for you to avoid short form words, i was like you but then i got a poet advised me like i told you just now..so let wen be when, ur to be your and ur to be yours...at least for your poetry and for your poems, it already heartfelt and beautiful_Soul
Wow Rigzin you are a great poet this is a fantastic poem am so sorry about your mother she brought a wonderful poet in this world
mindblowing....i don't hv words........i mean, all d things r grt... the fear in the womb, only pretty child in d world, first love, the war silently fought, making god envy - these r just grt, incredible....... i had goosebumps when i read this.....full of emotions....10 on 10..... and the most wonderful was asking god to punish u or make u cry instead of ur mom - this is something that i always ask god...... u r a grt poet...kp writing
A universal feeling...in a poem which can be owned by every heart... .. u were d jewel in my life dat i ll always treasure... ...we speak of pain n torture... ..d pain was d look in ur eyes wen i saw u d last time.. ..d torture was in seeing tears fall frm d angelic eyes of my mother.. ....painful...! : (
I really loved this poem, well deserving for a mother, it touched my heart Thank you!