An Ode To My Mother Comments
Oh, Mother! ! the wonder of my life,
A beacon of love who vanquishes strife:
A guardian angel whose presence I feel,
A sanctuary of safety, a balm to heal.
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.....and your alliterations and illustration and Poet's Notes. Are you sure you aren't ME? But I don't 'do' illustrations. : ) bri
filigree: 'An intricate, delicate, or fanciful ornamentation' etc. I'm REALLY liking the poem, its flow, sentiment, and rhyming.
AND 'sanctuary of safety'? I love alliterations also, along with ice cream. Time to keep reading. : )
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7/19/2025 3:19:55 AM # 1.0.0
Poem's last two words: 'love abides.'. How about 'love does abide'? I like that better. And I suggest deleting at leasts the 2nd comma.
Thank you for your insights Sir... I shall take note of it. 🙂 I never thought anyone would go through my poems actually... am just a starter so love your feedbacks.