Thursday, January 15, 2009

An Ode To My Heartache Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've tried to fight you
I've tried to stand tall
But I cannot avoid you
I crawl or I fall
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Jessica Jemima
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Jazib Kamalvi 24 December 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Jessica j. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Alison Cassidy 16 January 2009

To avoid the heartache is to take the drama out of life and although you find yourself repeating the same bad choices, one day Mr. Right will turn up and you'll be able to laugh at those former dalliances that left you dangling and disconsolate. I like the self deprecating humor in this piece and its pleasing rhythm. Your final line rounds off the poem with a satisfying flourish. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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