Thursday, March 28, 2019

An Ode To Life Comments

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O to die old man, tasks left un-leaven,
To return— a fake coin to this planet;
Work harder, yet more mileage points to earn
That heaven calls goodly deeds done to date,
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Edward Kofi Louis 28 March 2019

In death my Faith! ! ! ! ! 🤗📚 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 March 2019

Yes, when life is there death can't be away, thank you Edward Louis.

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George Krokos 28 March 2019

This poem as the title suggests treats of a vast subject and it's handled quite well in the content and body of the poem itself. A massive undertaking. Well done.

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 March 2019

Thank you so much George krokos, and welcome to my poems. I look forward to your critical comments. For, I believe, comments should be constructive, but not goodie-goodie.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 March 2019

Life is a blessing. We should behold values and dignity. This poem is interestingly penned.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 March 2019

Thanks for reading this rather longish ode, Kumarmani Mahakul.

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