Monday, February 27, 2023

An Ode To Jasmine Comments

Rating: 3.7

I behold you as the solitary flower
On the ends of a branch-let
Ah, your fragrance travels miles
Gratifying even the dull insects!
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Dr Dillip K Swain
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Anjandev Roy 03 July 2023

Just marvelous......thank u, sir.....

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Dillipji, I just came back for a re. Enjoyed it more.

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Congratulations, Dillipji. This poem is now ranked #20 on Best Poems of Members. Each of your poems enjoy this privileged honour, one after the other. Of course, everyone of them deserves this recognition. I am sure, this poem will inspire many more poets like me to continue to write.

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Richard Wlodarski 02 March 2023

One of Mother Nature's precious gifts is brought to full life through this wondrous poem. So very beautiful, Dillip!

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Congratulations, Dillipji! This poem is ranked #39 today.

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Nosheen Irfan 01 March 2023

I love the whisper of the flower! I wish all humans could hear it. Let the flowers be as long as they live. Brilliant piece!

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Nosheen Irfan 01 March 2023

Wo beautifully Wordsworthian! The healing power of the Nature is undeniable. A poem reflective of a timeless and universal truth!

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The poem is placed at position #72 in the list of Top Member Poems today. Congratulations, Dillipji.

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Pallavi Tripathi 28 February 2023

I think i learned a little something too!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 28 February 2023

I love you for your delicacy Enthralling my soul with sheer ecstasy......fascinating lines. Read the poem once again today.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 27 February 2023

What a fascinating Ode to Jasmine, dear Dillip ji. Sparkling, Dazzling and enthralling.....100 + To my favourite

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The poem is added to MyFavourites and Five-Starred.

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Beautiful poem, exuding the brilliant fragrance of real sublime poetic talent and high degree of aesthetics

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Yes Dillipji! I think I can hear the whispers of the jasmine flower shivering in the cold February evening breeze. I could imagine him planting a hasty kiss on her white cheeks. Love abounds..

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Anjandev Roy 27 February 2023

Take my flying kiss in sublime mood......brilliant.....thank u Sir.....

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Dr Dillip K Swain

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